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The End's Beginning - Draft 4 by Lynn Robertson Hay, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 03 Oct '16 15:29

If you saw the end of the world coming, would you tell?

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This is a great reference to the science in the story and done well will plug a gap in the backstory and world.

  • As it stands, Don and Jim’s relationship feels a little contrived, unless it is in context of e.g. a NASA campus or somewhere else you’d expect to find lots of astronomers milling about
  • Consider making Don not an astronomer, and merely questioning why Jim chose to tell people rather than staying silent. The core question being: why did Jim inflict this pain and terror on people?

A great concept. Well done, Lynn!

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The End's Beginning - Draft 3 by Lynn Robertson Hay, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 15 Jul '16 16:12

If you saw the end of the world coming, would you tell?

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The End's Beginning - Draft 2 by Lynn Robertson Hay, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 05 Jan '16 17:51

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The End's Beginning - Draft 1 by Lynn Robertson Hay, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 03 Jan '16 21:36

If you saw the end of the world coming, would you tell?

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